Nude

To bare the body is to reveal stories.
        How she owns the light and makes
her skinmaps and close-ups of bones seeable
        amongst the shape-shifting shadows, her lower half
outspread like a wishbone.
        How her private core hides behind the frail fences
of fingers. How she sophisticates her neck
        through a supple twist, the way
a young doe discerns some forest’s nuance, slighting
        the far-off hunter, poising her head into a profile,
her hair with strokes of white light,
        eloquence of her mouth, nose, eyes.

Then how she uncurls into another
        body of work. This time like a cat in her midnight prowl,
slinking towards the moon-lit window.

How she ascends, eyeing
        by the shoulder, in transience of breath,
'til the camera glimpses
        her most perfect compliance.

-Arian Rey Tejano © 2012 A Noiseless Patient Spider. All rights reserved

15 comments:

  1. Your blog is like a refined Japanese rock garden, becoming simpler and simpler so that the art, your poetry, shines like a diamond stuck in between the white sand.

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  2. Once again, you stun me wordless. Such beautiful language, the images--skinmaps, a doe slighting the hunter, wishbone, etc.--and the final, crowning irony. Well done. So very well done.

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    1. I really like the primary verse.It feels complete.
      It feels a little 'separate' from the last 2- ask yourself if they are afterthoughts- if not; work to blend them into cinq with top verse. -I don't mean to be critical here- it is only
      one impression! thanks for visiting! thanks for sharing-

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  3. you had me from this wonderful first line/observation:

    To bare the body
    is to reveal stories:

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  4. Dear Arian: Exquisite imagery; "slinking into this blackened studio" "she owns the light" and "her most perfect compliance" as the "doe" she is "profile" perfect within the "shape-shifting shadows"; quite brilliant~!

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  5. as usual, your take is always wonderful! an inspiration for me...

    Happy valentines Arian!

    JJRod'z

    ps. thank you for your appreciation on my work... trying my best... :-)

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  6. Arian this is a beautiful write! The imagery is amazing!

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  7. Brilliant take on the prompt, Arian!

    Hank

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  8. I liked this.. one enters into the world of the observer. You sustain the imagery very clearly indeed.

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  9. skinmaps and close-ups

    Great way to describe a photograph...

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  10. I want to hang the first line around my neck. I want it to be my history. I want to BE this poem.

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  11. Yes...skin maps and stories...I love how you wrap it up at the end with waiting for the camera to capture the perfect image...

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  12. Ariano, this poem is Operatic. So many wonderful lines.

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  13. A lovely trail of magic.

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  14. tender, lovely... i think i will stay a while, indulge myself, and read it again...

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